慰問信 【文體概述】

　慰問信是指同學親友考試失利、生病、受傷或遇到火災、水災、被盜等不幸事件，給對方表示慰問的信件。慰問信要寫得真誠并注意措辭。要圍繞一個中心，鼓勵對方并讓其從中得到安慰和鼓舞。寫信時常包括：對不幸事件表示同情→進行安慰和幫助→鼓勵其努力→再次表示同情并希望其早日復原。

　【常用語塊】

　1. 很抱歉/震驚得知……______________________________ 2. 聽到……我深感難過______________________________ 3. 請接受我最深切的慰問______________________________ 4. 我想送你我最美好的祝愿______________________________ 5. 我無法相信……______________________________ 6. 對……表示同情______________________________ 7. 我們充滿了……______________________________ 8. 請轉達我對……的同情______________________________ 9. 最好的祝愿……______________________________ 10. 我們都希望……______________________________ 11. 我相信你會成功……______________________________ 12. 取得完全康復______________________________ 13. 出院______________________________ 14. 我祝愿你快速康復______________________________ 15. 渡過難關______________________________

　【套用句式】

　1. 聽說火災毀了你漂亮的住宅，我難過極了。

　________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我們感到很悲痛。

　________________________________________________________________________ 3. 請轉達我向你家人的慰問。

　________________________________________________________________________

　4. 祝你很快康復。

　________________________________________________________________________ 5. 大家都希望你早日歸來。

　________________________________________________________________________

　【短文改錯】( 做短文改錯，背經典范文) Dear John, I am shocking to hear that you have severe flu and now are in hospital. I get this news from your mother and knew you must be absent for half a month at the classes. Do are careful while you are ill. Don’t worry about your lesson and I am willing to help you learn from them when you return. We are best friends so I will never allow you to fall behind. You can watch television or listen to radio programs to help pass the time but forget your pains while you recover. I did hope that I can see you soon and bring you any funny cartoons.

　 Yours truly, Li Hua

　【課堂練習】

　 假定你是李華，你的同班同學王剛家鄉(xiāng)10月4日遭受臺風“彩虹(Typhoon Mujigae)”襲擊，洪水毀壞了家園，你作為班長給正在抗洪的他寫一封慰問信，要點如下：

　1. 對該同學表示關心； 2. 向其提供一些幫助，如捐助和補習； 3. 表達希望和對其重建家園的信心。

　注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。

　Dear Wang Gang, We’re so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins.________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

　Best wishes!

　Yours sincerely,

　Li Hua

　【課外作業(yè)】

　假定你是李華，你的好友李明參加了今年的中國好聲音(The Voice of China)比賽，沒有進入決賽，感到很傷心。請你給他寫一封慰問信，要點如下：

　1. 表示難過和理解； 2. 失敗原因不在于他，而是另有別的緣故； 3. 勉勵他不要灰心，來年再戰(zhàn)必能成功。

　注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。

　Dear Li Ming, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua

　 慰問信 常用語塊 1. I was so sorry/shocked to learn of the news that… 2. I am deeply sorry to hear that…/ I just can’t tell you how sorry I am to hear that… 3. Please accept my deepest sympathy… 4. I want to send you my best wishes for… 5. I couldn’t believe that…

　6. have/show sympathy for… 7. We are filled with… 8. Please convey my sympathy to… 9. Best wishes for… 10. We are all hoping… 11. I am sure you will succeed in… 12. make a full recovery 13. leave the hospital / be discharged from the hospital 14. I wish you swift/quick/speedy recovery 15. go through the difficulty 套用句式 1. I was so sorry to hear of the fire that destroyed your beautiful house. 2. We are filled with deep sorrow. 3. Please convey my sympathy to your family. 4. Best wishes for your speedy recovery. 5. We are all hoping you will be back soon. 短文改錯 作者寫信給約翰，對其生病表示慰問。

　1. shocking→shocked

　主要是人，要用 shocked。

　2. 在 severe flu 前加 a

　因 flu 是可數(shù)名詞。

　3. knew→know

　因要與并列謂語 get 時態(tài)保持一致。

　4. at→from

　固定搭配 be absent from 意為“缺席”。

　5. are→be

　祈使句，故要用 be。

　6. lesson→lessons

　根據(jù)后面的 them 可知要用復數(shù)。

　7. 去掉 them 前的 from

　根據(jù)文意可知，此處是指“幫助你學習功課”，而不是“向功課學習”。

　8. but→and

　此處顯然是“順承”關系，而非“轉折”關系。

　9. did→do

　全文主體時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。

　10. any→some

　肯定句要用 some。

　課堂練習 Dear Wang Gang,

　We’re so sorry to hear that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins. We’re filled with deep sorrow. Please convey my sympathy to your family. Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you. I, as a monitor, on behalf of our class, express our most sincere pity and care for you. Besides, we make a donation of some money, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty. We believe that with the help of so many kind people, a better house can be rebuilt. Finally, we’re all hoping you’ll be back soon and we will make up the lessons for you. Best wishes!

　Yours sincerely, Li Hua 課外作業(yè) Dear Li Ming, I am deeply sad to hear that you could not enter the finals of The Voice of China of this year. I quite understand how you feel now. You have been doing well and your failure is not your own fault, I am sure. However, as we know, failure is the mother of success. I do hope you won’t lose heart and will get ready to try again. Still you have many more chances to try for you are so young. Fate (命運) only can be changed by working hard, so if you go on practising singing, I am sure you will succeed next year. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua

　咨詢信 【文體概述】

　咨詢信是寫信人對某方面的信息感興趣，希望了解詳細信息的信件。通常包括三部分內容：1. 說明自己的計劃或目的，也就是詢問信息的原因；2. 征詢具體信息；3. 期待回復并表示感謝。

　 【常用語塊】

　1. 尋求幫助_________________________________ 2. 向某人提供某物_________________________________

　3. 首先_________________________________ 4. 盼望著_________________________________ 5. 更多的信息_________________________________ 6. 即將到來_________________________________ 7. 為……向某人收取……費用_________________________________

　8. 為……而表示感激之情_________________________________ 9. 對……來說很重要_________________________________ 10. 寄回_________________________________ 11. 對......感興趣_________________________________ 12. 參加_________________________________ 13. 決心要做某事_________________________________ 14. 希望......_________________________________ 15. 缺乏/缺少_________________________________

　 【套用句式】

　1. 如果能給我提供……方面的信息我將不勝感激。

　__________________________________________________________________ 2. 我寫信是想知道您能否給我提供有關……的信息。

　__________________________________________________________________ 3. 此外，有沒有我要特別注意的事情？ __________________________________________________________________ 4. 您能告訴我……嗎？ __________________________________________________________________ 5. 期待您及時答復。

　__________________________________________________________________

　【短文改錯】( 做短文改錯，背經典范文) Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student in China or I plan to go to Britain to attend summer school during the vacation. I had seen your advertisement, and I would like to know anything more about your six-week English course. First where will the course start and how many class hour are there per week? Beside, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. What I would also like to know how much I have to pay to the course and whether accommodation is including. Would there be host family or university dormitory? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua

　【課堂練習】

　假定你是李華，最近你在當?shù)貓蠹埳峡吹揭粍t游泳培訓班的廣告，稱其有稱職教練(instructor)，一周包會。你會一點游泳，但水性不太好，想在暑假參加訓練。請你寫一封咨詢信了解相關情況，要點如下：

　1. 訓練的具體時間和地點； 2. 條件和費用； 3. 其他特別注意的事項。

　注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。

　Dear Sir/Madam,

　I have read your advertisement in the newspaper._______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________

　Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

　【課外作業(yè)】

　假定你是李華，寒假中你去澳大利亞旅游，可是回國后發(fā)現(xiàn)你的相機落在旅館了，所以你要給旅館負責人寫一封咨詢信。要點如下：

　1. 入住時間：1 月 27 日～2 月 5 日；房間號：608 2. 相機：型號 Canon Ixus860，白色；你的 17 歲生日禮物，很重要 3. 請他/她幫你尋找并寄回，表示感謝 4. 你的地址在信封上 注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。

　Dear Sir/Madam, I am very grateful for your great service while staying at your hotel, but____________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua

　 咨詢信 常用語塊 1. ask for help 2. provide sb. with sth. 3. to start with 4. look forward to 5. further information 6. round the corner 7. charge sb. for…

　8. be grateful for… 9. be important to… 10. post back 11. be interested in…/take interest in… 12. take part in/participate in 13. make up my mind to do sth. 14. in the hope of/that 15. be short of / be in lack/demand of 套用句式 1. I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning… 2. I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding… 3. Besides, is there anything that I should pay special attention to? 4. Would you be so kind as to tell me…? 5. I am looking forward to your immediate response. 短文改錯 作者寫信 咨詢 參加暑期英語培訓課程的一些情況。

　1. or→and

　兩句之間是“順承”關系，而非“選擇”關系。

　2. 在 summer 前加 a

　單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞前用不定冠詞表泛指。

　3. had→have

　根據(jù)上下文語境，此處應用現(xiàn)在完成時。

　4. anything→something

　肯定句要用 something。

　5. where→when

　根據(jù)上下文邏輯，此處應該是表“什么時候”的疑問句。故填 when。

　6. hour→hours

　因 how many 后須用名詞的復數(shù)形式。

　7. Beside→Besides

　此處表示補充說明關系“此外/而且”，beside 意為“在......旁邊”。

　8. 去掉 I would also 前的 What

　后面是一個完整的句子，What 在此顯然是多余的。

　9. to→for

　固定短語 pay for 意為“為......付費”。

　10. including→included

　此處為被動結構，意為“......包含在內”。

　課堂練習 Dear Sir/Madam, I have read your advertisement in the newspaper. You mentioned in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week’s training.

　I can swim a little but I’m not very confident in the water. So I’m interested in taking part in the training course. Fortunately, the summer holiday is around the corner. I’m writing to inquire when and where the course will be given, and how long the training course will last each day. I also want to know how much you will charge me for that. Besides, would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary? Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 課外作業(yè) Dear Sir/Madam, I am very grateful for your great service while staying at your hotel, but I’m writing to ask for your help with sending back my camera that I left in your hotel. I checked in on January 27 and out on February 5 and stayed in Room 608 for the whole time. Perhaps because I left in such a rush for the airport, I made the mistake of leaving my camera in the room. Since it was a gift from my parents on my 17th birthday, it’s very important to me. It’s a white Canon Ixus860. I would be very grateful if you could help me find it. If found, the camera can be posted back to me by using the address on the envelope. I am looking forward to your early reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua

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